Nice, but it isn't industrial.
Great song, but this doesn't belong in industrial, this is breakbeat/drum n bass. Great song tho. Fun. A little bland, not much going on in it, besides a few fun little fillers, but you mostly just keep building upon one loop over and over.
Industrial Jazz?!
This is cool. A mix of industrial sounds and jazz inspired riffs. Very neat. The sounds are cool, but they get old fast. You try to switch it up, but it still ends up being a bit uninteresting. Overall, this is pretty cool! Lots of neat effects and stuff going on!
Nice job!
Cool!
Nice sounds. Wait, whats with that synth? Its sounds like its out of sync. Overall, not bad. Everything fits together well, if not a little bland. This basically just repeats over and over and adds and subtracts various elements for psuedo-variety. Good attempt. Very good sound for a first try! Your production is very nice, but your arrangement is pretty boring. Try to do more than just repeat everything over and again. I like it! But there's also a lot fo room for improvement!
Nice first song! I hope you do more stuff. I think once you learn some good arran gement techniques, we will see great stuff from you!
That's it?
Unfortunately, this is a very simplistic song. The only reason this sounds rempotely like industrial is the metallic drum you have halfway through the song. Overall, this is nothing to impressive. Synths are very dry and boring. This song has no character or emotion. Too little going on and the layers are wholey unelated to each other, so the song just sounds jumbled.
Overall, just a messy mesh of sounds that gives you an excuse to call it industrial.
This is not MK
Good song tho. Aside from the the "Mortal Kombat" scream, the song you remixed is called "Control" by Traci Lords and Juno Reactor. A damn fine song and certainly better than the actual MK theme "Techno Syndrome" by The Immortals.
Your remix is fun and creative, well executed, but as far as the remix goes, I prefer the original. "Control was an incredibly tight, involved, layered song and your version makes use of little more than the main lead. Great song, good remix.
Sorry. "Control" was alot better than this.
oh, man do i feel like an idiot. I just listened to the song. I've heard it before, I just went off memory for this one. I agree with you, I'd rather listen to the original song than mine. :P
Great as always!
Nice! Sounds like Danny Elfman! Cool stuff! A little short, but its great!
Nice.
I wrote a story years ago about a fantasy world called Lothia. This is cool! Very nice! I love this! This is great! Great stuff! I don't know what to say about this! Excellent. What is Legen od Gaia anyway? I want to see it!!
I'm a whore
Wow. This sounds great. Who did your sound design? :P
Seriously, I was so glad to get this version out. Its a great piece and it sounds great now!
I notice that the length of the song caused me to encode it pretty low, so it has some quality issues there but its not too noticeable.
Great arrangment!!!
Wow!
This is awesome. When teh whole orchestra kicks in that nwas awesome! This is great stuff! Great work!!
Thanks :) I spent a lot of time on this when I first made it.
Good!
Good loop, but that bass dtum gets old REALLY fast. Other than that, drum work is great! Lots of diversity in the drums and melody. Your synth choice is questionable here, I tyhink some reverb and sonic effects are in order. This just sounds like a weak lo-fi oboe synth. Get something cleaner and synthier in there. Nice work though.
Great loops, but when are you gonna make a full song? You've got some grteat stuff here!
hey thanx! i can see what order u reviewed them in now! im actually workin on a song cuz my last one sucked nuts but i hope itll be good. Thanx again!
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